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panel 1.we open on a close-up of some weed being set ablaze by the flame of a lighter. the brown burn spreading across the green weed is palpable in the glass bowl piece.panel 2.close-up of the main chamber of the bong. the water within boils into a gas that clouds the glass walls.panel 3.and now we zoom out and see who"s using the bong. a sugar glider/tarsier in very casual, in-home clothing, chilling out on a worm-out couch. a tuft of hair covers one of her large eyes. also on the couch is a snail fur, staring at the ceiling in a daze. she"s also dressed for home, and her dreads hang off the edge of the couch. these two are Sugar and Lola, respectively.panel 4.suddenly, sugar has a bad reaction to the smoke she"s been partaking in. the camera zooms up to her face as she scrunches in on the painful couch, globs of tears squeezed out of her blue eye. she chokes with a "KuF uF", prompting lola, from off-panel, to respond.dialog:Lola: Don"t choke, ha ha.panel 5.zoom out a little. sugar"s got a grimace of discomfort, a tear still clinging to her eye. the other eye is now covered by her hair. she passes the bong to lola, whose hand is visible in the panel"s corner. dialog:Sugar: I"m so glad-snf-this semester"s over..Lola: yeah.panel 6.turn around, now we are viewing the couch from behind, where lola"s head is more prominent, she"s adjusted herself up to take her hit of the bong, bringing it closer to her face. also in the panel, you can see the state of their living condition. their TV is set up on top of a beaten-up cardboard box, and the one visible shelf is entirely bare. also, sugar"s head just barely is visible, sinking down into the couch.dialog:Lola: you were so busy... -- just one more, though.panel 7.close-up of sugar from head-on. for the first time, you can see both of her eyes, as she stares up to the side, lost in a somber thought. her right eye is blue while her left is brown.panel 8.same shot, but a bit expanded. as sugar shifts her position, the look of discomfort grows. now the tip of her tail is visible, and it thumps against the wall of the couch.panel 9.same shot. sugar"s settled into the new pose, her shoulder pressing up to her face, her tail now still. she blushes a bit, with a smile, however small and defeated it is.dialog:Sugar: ... yeah.panel 10.the camera"s now back to showing the couch from the front. sugar and lola are both visible. as the brief smile on sugar fades, lola sits up, with a small smile of her own. but hers appears to be fueled by love.panel 11.and love, it is! lola leans forward, surprising sugar with a wonderfully gay kiss! thanks to lola"s long snout, allowing her to reach sugar"s face even with sugar"s leg getting in the way of her forward lean. sugar"s surprised!
jewetogether 21st May 2016, 9:08 PM
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shared the comic with everyone i know. unfortunately thats three people. this story is good. your art is good. you are very very good.